Downpour

This follows after Inferno. It makes more sense to read it second.

You were once 

the thread that mended the rips and tears in my soul

whose kindness washed away my tears

who nurtured me like a newborn foal

who chased away the darkness in my fears

You used to be

the fairy who rewarded me for teeth lost

the saint who made me believe in magic

who defended me no matter the cost

who sheltered me from experiences most tragic

You

who I can no longer trust

who hurt me with ridicule

whose love feels so unjust

who made me feel like a fool

I

am forcefully leaving this nest

to fall or to fly

watch me attempt this life's test

or hear me whisper good bye.

Reviews

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

Very much like my own life. Good work

[Jaclyn]

I really can't review this objectively. Something about it just made me want to cry and cry and cry. It's really beautiful, really sad, and I absolutely think is such an innocent, wonderful stanza:

You used to be
the fairy who rewarded me for teeth lost
the saint who made me believe in magic
who defended me no matter the cost
who sheltered me from experiences most tragic

REALLY good.