The Bit Of The Song I Wrote That Just Ripped Off Queen's "Keep Yourself Alive"

lyrics, unfinished.

Whatever knocked it out of me

Had a great disguise

I got it complementary

I got it as a prize

I could see it in his language

I could see it in his eyes

He never spoke a word to me

He never spoke a lie

Quiet as the sniper

Fast as his bullet flew

If you ever get me working

My life belongs to you

Author's Note

Im not sure what it means... looking back on it it seems like sex or a relationship, but it was one of those that is just spewed up, so really it could be anything. enjoy or fuck off.

Reviews

[India Brooks]

I'd love to hear more (: very good- no need to be so aggressive in your author's note though! I love the way it flows so effortlessly and elegantly (: well done!

[ForTheWorld]

brilliant, great write of lyrics.. =D