Simply Distance

Sun is shining
and so I open my eyes,
I look beside me 
and you aren't there
But I can still smell the scent of your skin...

Everything in this room reminds me of you, darling
I know we always fought
for that distance to be gone
but we didn't last...

I had another bad day
and you could tell by the answers I send,
but you give me a smile of yours
And I'm blown away... 

By the end of the day
I feel the tiredness in my eyes
My only wish right now
Is to be held in your arms... 

Reviews

[Micheal Firth]

The first stanza is really nice, you can capture the essence of how you feel in the morning as you first wake up, awesome. There are a few things I'd like to point out for your benefit:

"I know we always fighted"

Fighted isn't a word. However fought is!

As well:

"but we didn't lasted..."

The "-ed" at the end last isn't need it would just be "last" in that situation.

Great job once again, keep em' coming!

[Dani Todorova]

Thank you so much, I appreciate your review and I won't make those mistakes again! :)