This Heart

I know it seems bad

To fall so hard

But my heart doesn't know

What pain feels like...

Don't let this heart

Sink into the deep

I know it seems so hard

But I want nothing more

Than to feel this love...

Sometimes it's breaking apart

It feels nothing but a heart attack,

My love for you will always shine so bright

Even through the tough times...

Don't let this heart 

Find another way

Keep it close

So it can't escape...

Reviews

[maria ( rose)]

Don't let this heart

Find another way

Keep it close

So it can't escape...wow..great ending to a wonderful poem Dani..Think a lot of us can relate to these words..

[Dani Todorova]

Thank you so much :)

[maria ( rose)]

your very welcome:)

[Sami Khalil]

"Sometimes its breaking apart

Its feels nothing but a heart attack,

My love for you will always shine so bright

Even through the tough times...




Don't let this heart

Find another wa"

A splendid read and write...Bravo...........

[Dani Todorova]

I'm sorry for my mistakes, it was written through my tablet and I wasn't aware of the mistakes I did. Apologies.

[Sami Khalil]

OK. You are welcome...:).......................

[Dani Todorova]

I hope you liked it, though. I feel bad for my mistakes now.

[Sami Khalil]

:)........................

[Stephen]

Don't let this heart
Find another way
Keep it close
So it can't escape... It's an impressive stanza. I loved this last one. your a great talented writer. I hope to see you get published someday.

Keep up the great work!