My Wrath

Just felt like writing something

My wrath can barley be described.
My Hope is only in my pride.
Don't be mislead by my happiness,
Or the Smile I give you.
It is just a prelude to your sudden doom.
A gloom that I will unleash,
That will over shadow hell.
My wrath is one of tempest wind,
Crushing Hail,
Volcanic fury,
Tsunami strength,
Earth quaking surprise,
A demonic yell.
Fueled by my pride.
Never again to feel that hurt,
Never again to feel the pain.
Only the tingling sensation
Of my contemplating brain.
Fused with thoughts on how to maximize your pain

Author's Note

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Reviews

[HorrorMaster]

Very awesome poem

[deadly healer]

for something that u just felt like writing u did very well. coyote is right, there is alot of powerful words that really made a point get across to me. another job well done.
-deadly healer

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong and powerful words made your point loud and clear. I like the use of nature. Nature give us life and she can take it away. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Brianna Brie]

Ouch! Such fury!! It is just like natures wrath.

[Color of the Iris]

Wow, talk about working with nature! 100/100

[Adelia Alighieri]

Great work with the description! Well done!

[Ruth]

This is potently full of heart wrenching determination love, if we could hit out at things with such power, would it take the pain away? Who knows! Beautfiully done!
xx