True Drug Addiction

...I think i'm blushing

I'm so cold
The snakes are on me
Oh so hot
You left me full of your drug
Barley conscious
Not breathing at all
Your drug has left me weak
Delirious
It filled me with incoherent speech
You gave me a sample once before

Now all I want is more
Give me the sweet satisfying seduction
Give it all
With out wearing protection
I am so hot now
Sweat dripping off my brow
I need to inject you in my vein's
In order to release my dreams
I can't stop taking it now
The way you grind
Sending chills to my toes
I sell my belongings in order to get another hit
I even make 40 mile trips
To taste your luscious spit
I will never get over it
I need you now
I need to bite my lip
What I am trying to say is I crave it.

Author's Note

...hope you all get the meaning of the "It"

Reviews

[JenLyn]

Very erotic! I love the lines "You left me full of your drug" and "I need to inject you in veins in order to release my dreams" Awesome write! Keep it up! :)

[Ashley Black]

i honestly think this may be one of my favorites definitely one that stays in my mind for years to come loved it! very well done :]

[Coyote Poetry]

To crave and need someone that made us crazy with their appearance and the need of their touch. Not a better emotion and desire to have. I like the description and the story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[manjula.babaladi]

All I can do is give a meaningful smile, reading your poem which is full of passion from tip to toe ( I mean beginning to end ) ;-)

[Jessica Mai]

This is really really really good! I love all the puns and the passion screams from your writing. This is definitely in my opinion of of your very best works. Keep it up!

[deeps]

This is wonderful and cute

[ashley]

Haha, I got the meaning. This poem is fantastic, the imagery is great. Lol, this was very sexy and so well written.

"I need to inject you in my vein's
In order to release my dreams"

It doesn't get sexier than that lol. Nice.

[R E Tree]

When I first started reading this poem I got right into it. It was describing straight away the evilness of somebodys drug and how it was affecting you. The poem describes well of suffering you have been through from being so obsessed with his drug. There are many ways of describing a relationship like this you could of described the man as a monster that wants her for nothing but for his pleasure. But overall you have thought deeper then that and described the women as a addict and thinks of sex like a drug.

[Ruth]

lol
Got ya!
Clever
xx

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

yea think i understand.nice write