The Warrior

Hmmm.

It's bee twenty long years since he passed that test
A very good teacher he would become
Not to fail like all the rest
His battles became the stuff of legend
Stories the told of him
Of his supposed dying breath
He accomplished the impossible
With out even trying enemies bounced off his chest
Time takes its toll
The body goes the way of all flesh
From dust we were born
Dust we become at death
Not this warrior though
He lives on
This is no jest
He fights day and night
Striking foes down so we can rest
The warrior is a man
A man tougher then one would guess
IF you marry such a warrior
Never forget
He strives to pass every test

Author's Note

Not sure where this came from. Hey leave me alone. its 9am and I have been up all night. At least one poem I wrote tonight was bound to turn out to be crap.

Reviews

[Jennika has a short att..]

Pwetty picture :] I noticed in the first line, "It's bee twenty long years" bee=been. Other than that I don't think I saw any mistakes, and I'm sure I've said this hundreds of times, but this is an amazing poem. Warriors are flippin awesome :D

[deadly healer]

it was very creative. It was most definately not crap. I write some of my best pieces when i cant even think to get out of bed. Its usually about 3 in the morning that ideas just pop up for me. This piece shows that there is a story behind every word. I loved it.

[JENY]

It is very true……
Nice writing……

[Ashley Black]

naw it's really great i love it and i love the voice you portray through all your poetry it's amazing

[Randy`s Princess]

nice write very interesting how a warrior`s world works I liked it :)

[FeliciaS (Poetic Prince..]

Not bad @ all

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Not crappy This is a Great Piece i will Fav. This thanks for sharing

[Kat Plunkett]

great poem.

[HorrorMaster]

I love warriors, I thought this was a good poem.

[R E Tree]

I like how this warrior is described so unique and powerful. I think everyone would inspire this warrior as everyone wants to overcome enemies and be the best in the world. But death worries us all to be this warrior you would live forever that would help a lot of people that are scared of death. Overall this warrior has many qualities what other people would enjoy to have. The warrior is inspring and this write is inspiring as it brings the warrior to life