Your love is what I hate

Written from inspiration from Randy's Princess

Your love is what I hate
Its bitter and a dried up taste
You sit alone on a forgotten plate
Food that my stomach can not take
I tried to swallow you with wine
But the taste drives me out of my mind
Like vomit mixed with intestine juice
All I can think of is how you make me puke
I try to get the acquired taste
But your just like the steak that is too tough to chew
I try you with milk but you make that taste spoiled too
I can't stand that all I have to eat is you
I wait for a while and try again
But now you taste rotten times ten
I don't know what to do with your love
I guess I will try and digest it with salt and vinegar
Your love is what I hate I try to tell you
But you don't understand
You believe your taste is only meant for a few
So I suck it up and try not to spew
No wonder why no one can stand you

Author's Note

This was written from inspiration from Randy's Princess Poem "After Taste" Thanks Princess hope this makes you proud :)

Reviews

[Ruth]

Really powerful hon
A flavour of resentment in that wine!lol
xx

[R E Tree]

This poem has power to make someone feel worthless and empty inside. This poem is a good way of saying to someone I don't like you and I don't care. This poem also describes negative thoughts rushing through the mind of the poet and the poet can't help thinking of them. The poet thinks if he swallows something he is worried about it will be okay but nothing can make the taste good enough to swallow. The foods menchioned "steak", "milk", "juice" and "wine" explains this. Interesting write and I liked the rhyming at the begining. "wine" and "mind" are the best throughout the poem

[deeps]

This is a very well written write. I like this, i can feel all the emotion.

[A.Lee]

This one is very poetically written. It has a different feel than your usual stuff, so I figured I'd comment. Then question after reading it is: do you eventually get used to the taste and like it? say to hell with it and spit it out? or keep putting yourself through the torture of 'trying' to like it? For some reason this is actually one of my favorites of yours... Odd.

[Poeticpiers]

definitely not a taste I wish to aquire.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think this is a nice. I understand how you feel in this poem though. I think it is because of the people that I love, but they don't love me back. It hurts sometimes, but love is a painful struggle. Nice write. Thanks for sharing. :)