Your love is what I hate

Written from inspiration from Randy's Princess

Your love is what I hate
Its bitter and a dried up taste
You sit alone on a forgotten plate
Food that my stomach can not take
I tried to swallow you with wine
But the taste drives me out of my mind
Like vomit mixed with intestine juice
All I can think of is how you make me puke
I try to get the acquired taste
But your just like the steak that is too tough to chew
I try you with milk but you make that taste spoiled too
I can't stand that all I have to eat is you
I wait for a while and try again
But now you taste rotten times ten
I don't know what to do with your love
I guess I will try and digest it with salt and vinegar
Your love is what I hate I try to tell you
But you don't understand
You believe your taste is only meant for a few
So I suck it up and try not to spew
No wonder why no one can stand you

Author's Note

This was written from inspiration from Randy's Princess Poem "After Taste" Thanks Princess hope this makes you proud :)

Reviews

[Jennika has a short att..]

Ew, I just got a visual image of me drinking rurnt milk *shudders* Nasty. This is definatley one of my favorite poems of yours, because not only does it have something to do with food, but it's kinda gross too.(puke) I'm a weird girl -_-

[thatbryngirl]

very interesting, but very good.. pretty powerful

[JENY]

You know…
I read it three times….
Laughed and laughed….
I liked it sooooooooooo……much

witty…
You are man with a brilliant brain inside your head….
No doubt…

[Ashley Black]

god i love it i love it i love it can't think of any better way to put it other than to say i absolutely love it

[Coyote Poetry]

This person had a picky desire for food. But can't make everybody content. I like this poem. Sort of complain but more like explaining. Poem was fun to read. Ending was hard. But easy to frustrated with a picky eater. A very good poem.
Coyote

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

very interesting Kinda made my Stomach a little Twisted erm But still a good write

[Jessica Mai]

This is the only poem that's made me go "ooooooooooh that's harsh man" , which is a good thing so great write!

[James Watts]

My God, man. You have hit me with the exact same scenario that I am going through. I can relate to this in spades. Very nice write.

[HorrorMaster]

Very powerful, good write

[Randy`s Princess]

really good I liked it reminds me of my poem it`s great and I`m glad I inspired you to write this great job :0 *hugs*