I dreamed

I dreamed

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Its been a while since my last post. Some much going on and so little free time.

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I had a dream of you last night
I've dreamed of you every night
For 25yrs you have been my dream of comfort
Not one of fright
You were the voice that muffled in my new born ears
Has I slept Wanting to see your tears of joy
You were in my dreams giving me an encouraging cheer
You were in my dreams guiding me through tears
Timeless you have now become
Shedding light only meant for one
I was your pride
I was your final joy
Now that your gone
I keep my tears deep inside
Some say your in haven
Others say in hell
I know the truth
That I always tell
You are my lullaby
You are my dreams
The ones who think differently
Can all go to hell

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


Author's Note

Daniel Gardner
This is written for my Mom. She died when I was 13 around this time. And to this day no matter what dream I have she is in the background. Review, Rate Comment. But not on how the poem is written unless it is grammar.

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I love the last line "The ones who think differently can all go to hell" it makes me feel encoraged to stick up for myself. As I sometimes just ignore peoples negative opinions. It has made me feel I should stand my ground and not let anyone push me a side. Overall I like the picture and the blue font is boyish it describes who you are a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I love the last line "The ones who think differently can all go to hell" it makes me feel encoraged to stick up for myself. As I sometimes just ignore peoples negative opinions. It has made me feel I should stand my ground and not let anyone push me a side. Overall I like the picture and the blue font is boyish it describes who you are a lot.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am sorry about your mother. I still have my mother around, she is all i have left in my family. This is a real heartfelt piece here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


emotional and heart rending nice read it`s nice you hold your mom`s memory with you it`s great she`s always with you to :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting, people who have passed over often revisit at certain times love. This is a moving poem, passionately spoken from the heart xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


A mother love is never forgotten. I agree with you. No-one should talk badly of your mother. Your beginning was beautiful. We need to remember those people who made us content in a life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very sweet. You love her a lot, and it shows. A beautiful poem in her honor. Fantastic job, as always. :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very sweet... I'm sure she would have loved to see this and that she would be really proud of you right now. Even when you may not think so.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Daniel Gardner

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