Who am I?

Who am I?

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Forced into depression.

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Who am I?

Am I the man of your dreams?
Or the reason you cry?
Am I deaths henchmen?
Am I Satan's son?
Am I the greatest farther?
Or the dochbag they hope will die?
Am I the one who sweeps you off your feet?
Or the one who puts you on your knees?
Am i the one who takes your breath away?
The one you want everyday?
Or am I the thing you detest?
The one you truly regret?
Am I the one that pleases you to scream?
Or the one you see as a demon?
Who am I to you?
Who am I to me?
Which of these things you feel is truly me?
Which one should I ware today?

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


Author's Note

Daniel Gardner
I am trying to hang on to myself and my sanity in these dark times. Doing it alone is impossible. I have truly lost myself. I don't care about grammar and for once I don't really care if anyone reviews. I just had to put what is in my head out for a sec.

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Aww very sad poem, but I think you are a good person. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this. I thought it was very emotional. I don't know what else to say because this was beautiful. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I agree with the others. I having been feeling the same way and had to express myself too. And there is no way better in my opinion than to use the pen and pad, or these times the word processor. Nice write and never give up.

Posted 14 Years Ago


im left speechless

Posted 14 Years Ago


We play many faces in a life. Age has taught me to be kinder. Already too many demons roaming around. Poem is very good. The story was strong and the ending was very good. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


You're a lot of things, but none of the bad ones. Well written poem though.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! This is totally awesome here.
I really enjoyed this write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well, thats sometimes the best remedy love! This is excellent imagery, the ebb and flow of the self in this is awesome! xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is fantastic. A powerful poem. I'm sorry you're going through something. I know it doesn't mean much coming from a stranger, but if you ever wanted to talk, I'm here.
This is a very good write. Great job! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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