Just a thought

Just a thought

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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This is a song by Gnarls Barkley.

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All I want is your understanding
As in the small at of affection
'Why is this my life?'
Is almost everybody's question

And I've tried, everything but suicide
But it's crossed my mind

I preferred peace
Wouldn't have to have one worldly possession
But essentially I'm an animal
So just what do I do, with all the aggression?

Well, I've tried, everything but suicide
But it's crossed my mind

Life is a one way street, ain't it?
If you could paint it, I'd chalk myself going in the right direction
So I go all the way, like I really really know
But the truth is, I'm only guessing

And I've tried, everything but suicide
Ohh, but it's crossed my mind, just a thought

It's even dark in the daytime
It's not just good, it's great depression
When I was lost I even found myself
Looking in the gun's direction

And so I've tried, everything but suicide
But yes, it's crossed my mind,
but I'm fine

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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Daniel Gardner
I like the words of this song and wanted to share them. Tell me what you think about them too.

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This is really sad, but true. So many of us that face this have, had these feelings, can relate to the words. Always feeling defeated, always feeling like we are never good enough. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


there is emotion no doubt about that. it seems a little dry. im missing the music. im sure they did a very well job. i love the lyrics. it seems i would love it even more when i hear the music. music is something i need the tune to hear. i think of tunes that dont fit until i hear the tune. i think the lyrics are beautiful and rather inspiring and i am curious about the tune. i will be looking up the song myself.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love the lyrics and I'm definatley going to be looking these up. Thanks for sharing(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


Life is not perfect and you definately describe the dark side of life. the evil and suffering that goes on its just not right.

Posted 14 Years Ago


excellent job

Posted 14 Years Ago


this was a pretty good piece. nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I thought they were good.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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I'm an inspiring writer that has a million and ten thoughts running through his head all day. I joined this site because my wife inspired me to. I was not prepared for the thoughts to jump out so much.. more..

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