Silence

Emotional all over again....

We walk by and breaths is all I hear
My lips quiver
Just to call you near
So silent we have be come
Not realizing the setting sun
Our love has run dry
No more will we be alive
Limbo is no more I fear
Now we turn a deaf ear
Like a mime trapped in a box
Silent motions convey our thoughts
For in the end
The silence will infect our hearts

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Kristen]

Ah, silence. One of my favorite themes to write about. I really like this piece, my favorite line is "the silence will infect our hearts"... how true of a statement that is! Excellent write!

[Madana Dookieram]

once again i know the feeling - great poem

[rachielle]

This poem relays how much damage silence could cause. I have a few poems about this topic myself so I know how it feels. Anyway I loved how you portrayed the slow deterioration of a relationship of two so called lovers. The setting sun, the mime- all are genius. Great piece.

[James Watts]

I like this one. It fits my current mood and how I have been feeling of late. The heart is such a fickle thing, so easily broken if held by unsure hands. Very nice write.