Silence

Emotional all over again....

We walk by and breaths is all I hear
My lips quiver
Just to call you near
So silent we have be come
Not realizing the setting sun
Our love has run dry
No more will we be alive
Limbo is no more I fear
Now we turn a deaf ear
Like a mime trapped in a box
Silent motions convey our thoughts
For in the end
The silence will infect our hearts

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Doreen]

Another poem saturated with painful emotion. You paint a clear picture of the sadness.

[Jennika has a short att..]

I absolutley LOVE the picture. and the poem of course but the picture's awesome too.

[Marlena]

"be come" should be one word. Otherwise, I liked it, it's not my favorite by you but it isn't bad. Good work.

[deadly healer]

ooooooooooo. this one makes me shiver. its full of secrets and silence that conveys more emotion that any words. you made the poem short which seems to intensify the meaning of silence. awesomely written.

:D deadly healer

One word: Great

[HorrorMaster]

Awesome poem

100

[JenLyn]

Very nice, a different and better approach to a love poem at least that's how I interpreted it flowed well. :)

[deeps]

Silence cuts deep inside.
Thank you for your poem here and teh feelings that you shared.
You brought to me a new poem in my heart.
I can really feel this.

100/100

[Ruth]

The ending of this is sublime!

[A.Lee]

So find the bubbling river, take a drink, and let it refresh those hearts when they are barren. They say everything has an ending, and at times it may draw close, but you can always keep it at bay with the proper strength and refreshment. Well written though.