Silence

Emotional all over again....

We walk by and breaths is all I hear
My lips quiver
Just to call you near
So silent we have be come
Not realizing the setting sun
Our love has run dry
No more will we be alive
Limbo is no more I fear
Now we turn a deaf ear
Like a mime trapped in a box
Silent motions convey our thoughts
For in the end
The silence will infect our hearts

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Rogelio Chavez]

Excellent poem! i loved this one.

[Ashley Black]

good, powerful emotion. nice job. i really do love the way your show your emotion through your poetry its very thought provoking and makes it interesting to read. good depth to it as well.

[thatbryngirl]

again, i love this! very good...i like the "like a mime trapped in a box, silent motions convey our thoughts."

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

very sad, made me cry abit but very lovely poem. nice work

[lrigD]

Very sad, but, I think, sometimes very true... though silence does not have to be a bad thing. I like the subtle rhyming, it's not a very obvious pattern but somehow there is rhyming, and it makes it more fluent :)

[Katelin]

Really good, loved it. good job =D

[Brianna Brie]

Awl...very sad. Sometimes the distance just kind of sneaks up on us. That is when a couple says how did we get to this place. I like the reference to a mime trapped in a box. Kudos.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. Very good though.
100/100

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. I like the silence and quiet time my self. I like the feel in the poem. A intense feel of raw emotion waiting for something to happen. A very well written poem with a very strong story. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[JENY]

Good…..
But…..seems like an incomplete poem….
After reading it…..a feeling of incompleteness ….remains…
I don’t know why…