No one knows the rage within No one wants to believe it The shade of red does it no justice I cannot stand anymore This rage blisters like a sore It festers It oozes Decaying the flesh around it They watch as I grab my chest Feeling the evil blade plunged deep within My mind is a blaze The smoke blocking all logic Its consuming me Slow my eyes change to black Cotton drys my mouth Blood courses out my nose Finally my rage is set free Terrified and in pain I will make everyone suffer A care I do not have in the world Only one can guess how it came about But its to late A Plague I will unleash Of fear and no peace.
Strikes a chord. Very interesting expression of that 'burn the world' force that sadly when once set free can not be controlled, calmed, or tamed. Appreciate the sharing.
Very nice job with this one, definitely has an introspective vibe to it with a little hint of regret. Also, I'm loving the free verse you've got going on here as opposed to the rhyming scheme you had going on in most of your other stuff. Awesome job man!
Rage can be a good thing. We can make it our motivation to do great things. I like this poem. The strong lines made your desire point and ending was outstanding. A outstanding poem.
Coyote
Very candid introspection….self examination….
An attempt to come to terms with one’s on negative feelings….
That came out as a nice poem to read….and it is really nice…
I loves it!(: But only because I get the feeling you were really pissed or something. anywhos i loved it and that's all that matters...that and everyone else's thoughts :/
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