How much longer

Anger is starting to take over.....

How much longer
 For this I can not take
Day after day I put food on the plate
Never are things the way they seem
Lie after lie seem to seal my fate
Nothing I do seems to matter
No one seems to care
Even the one I love makes me feel despair
Things I do only turn out to be a few
Through blood sweat and tears i fight this world
Never seeming to win
Because it rips and tears
Emotion is harmful I am told
It keeps you from doing what your told
I can't seem to stop this
The ending result is priceless
I will rip it all apart
To pieces I will shred my heart
Soulless is the only true result

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ashley Black]

very good write. i love the way you show the emotion here
the ending is really good as well it really closes the poem off nicely

[Eric Cox]

A well penned poem of sadness and frustration.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was sad, but still well written. I liked your writing a lot. Thanks for sharing. :)

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

i go through the same thing its like a Echoing hurt in your soul mind and heart wanting to Rip it all out it Hurts so much but very beautifully written

[JENY]

What you have written is something everybody is familiar with in their life……
You are not alone…..
You put all of them into writing…….
In a beautiful way…..Nice…
We cant do without ‘patience and tolerance’….

[ashley]

Fantastic poem. I really like your work. You write real things, not a lot of flowery-ness (is that even a word? lol, it's late) in your work, not many pretty words. Lots of grit and humanity. Great job! :D

[deadly healer]

amazing. its kinda funny seeing the picture though. look at it long enough and he is catching flies. its a weird picture. but good poem.

[Doreen]

Wow, yeah...how many times have we felt this way. A very strong poem. I urge you to consider using punctuation. It will bring out the emotions and will have this piece read the way that you meant this to be read. Keep writing, Daniel!

[jeff hackworth]

nice metaphors =D

[Ruth]

Poignant and powerful, life seems to be turning like this of late for a lot of peopel! xx