Super Indeed

Mind races a lot and this is what cam out.

In the depths there are no breaths
In the deep you can not weep
In time you will shine
From the wine you will be divine
With a cape you will not escape
With a blow you will over throw
From their blood you will judge
In the end you will be supreme
With your sword you will win
From the fog you will emerge
In one day you will conquer the world
In your mind you have an immaculate soul
One day at a time you will climb
Your past will not last
Live each day like your last
Super Indeed is your self esteem.

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Reviews

[Ashley Black]

very nice job as usual i like the style you use here its really good

[Marlena]

This was cute, I really liked it :) Just watch out here though, "In you mind " should be "In your mind". Only issue I found :P

[Eric Cox]

A creative and cool write.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this poem It was really good. I liked the emotions. Good write.

[Kristen]

I really like the last line, another great write! Keep it up!

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is powerful and the last line is a true statement. Life is hard and we must be strong to struggle and win a few battle in a life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Interesting i always live life as it was my last to the fullest i have a love for life

[ashley]

This is fantastic. I really can't say more, it's truly incredible. Great job!

[Doreen]

A poem of strength and determination, the love and moral support for another. I have a feeling I know who this poem was written for, which makes my heart sing.
The only thing I noticed were a few spelling errors.
Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing!

[JENY]

Philosophically beautiful….
Beauty of wisdom….
Beauty of rhythm…
Beauty of truths…..
Altogether…nice reading