Angelic

Written for my wife.

A mist of rain
That Cools and soothes
A Gust of wind
That blows and moves

A shining Valkyrie
That only protects me
A wise mans fool
Who is smart for me

A powerful storm
That can destroy
A rebuilt dam
Holding up my flood waters

I can't imagine anything else
I can't imagine anyone else
She is my all

My rain
My wind
My Valkyrie
My fool

My storm
My dame
My Angelic strength

Author's Note

This is written for my wife Cattie Rain, truly she is my strength in my trying time. Comment, review, rate.

Reviews

[James Watts]

A very nice tribute to your wife and beautifully written. Nice work.

[JENY]

Beautiful………just beautiful….
Devine too…

[MissWordSmith]

so touching and beautiful. i loved this so much.
keep it up..
only one thing..
"A rebuilt dame
Holding up my flood waters"

is it supposed to be ''dame'' or dam?

[Manda]

awesome write

[Sseoni]

Wonderful poem! It was beautiful and a great poem! :D

[Jennika has a short att..]

Awesome poem. I swear I have fallen in love with your poetry because you have an amazing view on things. Again great poem, and I am speechless at the awesomeness of your skills.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful. You are a wise man when you know you have something precious in your life. The description and the words were of praise and love. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Doreen]

That blows and movies - did you mean moves?
She is may all - did you mean my all?

I LOVE the picture that goes with this. This piece has such a feeling of complete and total love and devotion. Very nicely done.

[deeps]

This is wonderful I enjoyed the read.

[Ruth]

Beautiful piece! Like the flow a lot xx