Imagine

Another random write

Wow I can't imagine
But I try
What it would be like to be entwined
To feel her chest on mine

To stare deep into her eyes
While one hand rubs her thigh
The other holding hers

I can't imagine but I try
Her lips pushed on mine
Her tongue caressing mine

To feel as one I can't imagine
But I try
To feel her hearts hum
Beating so fast as she tries not to collapse

To take a break from the passion
But to ask her out is something I can't imagine

Author's Note

I wrote this trying to let things go back to normal. Hope you all like it. As always, Comment, Review, Rate.

Reviews

[Sseoni]

Great poem! I really liked it! It was very passionate and intriguing! Amazing poem! :D

[Jennika has a short att..]

This an awesome poem. It's great that you're trying to get back to normal. Ugh, I hate reviewing stuff that leaves me speechless. 100/100

[Doreen]

Did you mean tongue caressing mine? It reads tong creasing mine. :)
This is really sweet! It has a feeling of love from afar. I like this.
I hope all is well.

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing. When we feel great love and care for someone. We don't want to lose them. A rejection would create a possibility of a lost friendship. I like this poem. Sweet words of desire were very good. You create a beautiful dream. I like the ending. Sometime when we don't try. We will wish forever we did. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[deeps]

This is wonderful. I like this write alot

[Ruth]

Great imagery and really vivid xx

[JenLyn]

I like this a lot the imagery was great IMO the only thing I saw wrong with it was a typo "beating so fast has she tries not to collapse." I think you mean "AS". Other than that a great write. :)