Imagine

Another random write

Wow I can't imagine
But I try
What it would be like to be entwined
To feel her chest on mine

To stare deep into her eyes
While one hand rubs her thigh
The other holding hers

I can't imagine but I try
Her lips pushed on mine
Her tongue caressing mine

To feel as one I can't imagine
But I try
To feel her hearts hum
Beating so fast as she tries not to collapse

To take a break from the passion
But to ask her out is something I can't imagine

Author's Note

I wrote this trying to let things go back to normal. Hope you all like it. As always, Comment, Review, Rate.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Great write very emotional. I like it.

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Nice Write Love the Imagination here

[deadly healer]

awwwwwwwwww. its sweet. passionate 2. it was very touching. pun intended.

[jeff hackworth]

hmm good poem

[rachielle]

I liked the way you wrote it, and the way you played it out. The way you made it red because it speaks of passion and love. The way you point out that you are merely trying to imagine things, even when the words you have written are very visual, and the way you emphasized that it was all imagination. I like the feel of innocence in it, that, in the end after all of that, all you wanted to do was ask her out. Great job!:D Keep it up.

[James Watts]

very nicely penned. Vivid and raw, yet soft. Nice work.

[JENY]

My god…….
I am going to marry somebody…
Tomorrow itself…..
Wow….wow….

[MissWordSmith]

brilliant write! i think we all can relate to this one! dreaming about someone... to such lengths... but not having the guts to do anything about it in reality. a great write!

[Manda]

another awesome write

[Eric Cox]

Nicely done. Great imagery in this. Cool write.