Leave it be!

Leave it be!

A Poem by Daniel Gardner
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Another poem that just popped in my mind.

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"Leave it be!"
I screamed to her
But she knocks over her favorite tea

Another round with me
Seems to be the only thing she wants to drink
"I'm sorry" I say

But she only moans and sways
"I won't do it again" I yell
Trying to drown out her elaborate tales

"I just saw her at Taco Bell" I plead
"Another Tale" she screams

I finally grow quite
Listening to her insight a riot

Lost in my own thoughts now
All I can think is wow

I approach her silently
Cautiously as she throws a towel
Praying she won't launch our cat

I touch her shoulders gently
Making sure I don't get smacked

Her fury turns to rage
As I embrace her with a gaze

"I love you"
I whisper

But all I feel is the tase
I collapse to the floor
Has she screams do you want more

Kicks me across the floor
Stopping to open the door
Then kicks me some more

The neighbors are shocked
As she tosses out my socks

I hear her say one last thing
"Leave it be"
She screams at me

© 2010 Daniel Gardner


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Daniel Gardner
I care only for non grammar reviews. I wrote this out of thin air.

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Interesting. Different from what I'm used to seeing, but well written. Good job! :D

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is diffrent, a woman kicking a man, most poems are the other way around. well done

Posted 14 Years Ago


I believe it was time to leave. Poem was very good. I like the story in your words. I like the ending. Made me smile. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2010
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Daniel Gardner
Daniel Gardner

Monroe, GA



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