Leave it be!

Another poem that just popped in my mind.

"Leave it be!"
I screamed to her
But she knocks over her favorite tea

Another round with me
Seems to be the only thing she wants to drink
"I'm sorry" I say

But she only moans and sways
"I won't do it again" I yell
Trying to drown out her elaborate tales

"I just saw her at Taco Bell" I plead
"Another Tale" she screams

I finally grow quite
Listening to her insight a riot

Lost in my own thoughts now
All I can think is wow

I approach her silently
Cautiously as she throws a towel
Praying she won't launch our cat

I touch her shoulders gently
Making sure I don't get smacked

Her fury turns to rage
As I embrace her with a gaze

"I love you"
I whisper

But all I feel is the tase
I collapse to the floor
Has she screams do you want more

Kicks me across the floor
Stopping to open the door
Then kicks me some more

The neighbors are shocked
As she tosses out my socks

I hear her say one last thing
"Leave it be"
She screams at me

Author's Note

I care only for non grammar reviews. I wrote this out of thin air.

Reviews

[Marlena]

Reviewing this poem, since you said it describes me a little in that last review you sent me.

Catch me on a bad day and maayyyybe... xD Nah, I kid. I liked this though, nice work :)

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was written well. I liked this poem. I thought it was interesting. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Eric Cox]

Geez! What a fury within the woman. This is a well written poem.

[Kaelyn Shea]

wow thats is all i can say wow :D

[deeps]

Wow! Powerful write really, Psycho mmmm! Maybe so. sounds that way.
I Like this I found it cute really.

[aaaa]

You got a fair amount of stuff about psycho women. Each is beautifully done, but I am starting to wonder who is your inspiration :P

[JenLyn]

Wow! Psychotic woman! I hope it's no one you know. The poem was nice though it could be considered prose, though I'm not an expert on the subject and there is a fine thin separating poetry and prose, But overall I think it was a good write. I think you should give yourself more credit for your writing because it is good. Keep writing! KUDOS TO YOU! 100/100

[LalaDia]

Woaaahh, psycho lady.

[James Watts]

Hey I can relate. When I was first married I lived in my mother-in-laws basement. So whenever my wife got really peeved at me I was sleeping on my mother's couch. Nice write.

[Tate Morgan]

we men deserve it