One Less....

A persons strife

One less feeling of insecurity
Why are my eyes to wide
Why can't I see the colors of a rainbow
Why can't I stop cutting
Why can't I stop hurting

One less loser at school
Why can't I get that A
Why can't others see I'm not gay
Why can't I go talk to her
Why can't he see I exist

One less child to raise
Why can't I stop the fighting
Why can't I stop him from drinking
Why can't I stop her from smoking
Why can't I believe in their love

One less idiot in the world.

Author's Note

This is on the fly. I have not written a poem in over five years. Hope you all like it.

Reviews

[Ashley Black]

very good. I love it. it's very realiztic and I canrelate to it. thanks for sharing. good work. keep it up.

[Ryan Falzon - Tymon]

Very sad, well written.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this. It was sad, but it was good. Thanks for sharing.

[Bette]

this is sad, but well done.

[MK]

It's really sad, but it definitely gets the emotion and thoughts conveyed correctly and directly