Dullboy

Dullboy

A Book by Dane Hurst
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A scared boy tries to cope when his mother is raped and killed in front of him and is later on bullied on his looks, a number of years later he extracts his revenge in gruesome ways.

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© 2014 Dane Hurst


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Very interesting story cant wait to read the rest of it if you put it on here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dane,
If broken up into conventional paragraph format this prologue would be much more readable. I stopped in the first sentence when I came to the unattributed quote. This may be a fine story but there are few story writers and readers in WC. I suggest you not miss a chance to engage them immediately and early in your fiction.

Cooper

Posted 10 Years Ago


Dane Hurst

10 Years Ago

Thank you for your advice Copper

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Added on March 27, 2014
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Dane Hurst
Dane Hurst

Guildford, Surrey, United Kingdom



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I'm a guy with an imagination that spins into stories thought I give them a try more..

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