a snowy poem

One by one the snowflakes fall from the sky

Like tiny drops of rain but colors of white

Cold and wet

But most of the time it makes such a beautiful snowy scene

It blankets the ground

Like a wonderful winter wonderland

Kids all out building snowmen

Parents out shoveling their walks

Looks like queen Elsa came to visit.

Making everything an icy blast.

Reviews

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

You create a scene of wonder that's easy to envision, especially if you grew up/live in a place that gets snow. This was quite fitting to read at the moment, since it just snowed here a few days ago. Simple but effective and I liked the nod to Frozen. Thanks for sharing.

[Laura Elizabeth Brown]

thanks for an awesome feedback

[Vria P Crow]

This is a pleasant vacation from the idea that winter is about death. Frankly, I am not fond of this season. I perceive it as cold and dead; isolation from nature. However, it does not need to be filled with doom and gloom. Pagan rituals remind us of this; the yule log, Christmas tree, and Santa folklore. This poem depicts how winter can be fun. I also enjoy playing in the snow and ice skating. There are wonderful outdoor activities that some overlook.

Thank you for sharing!

[Laura Elizabeth Brown]

i think i might share this in writing group. i just was thinking about winter and these ideas came to mind. i absolutely do hate winter though. seasonal depression is upon us. :(