In The End

I'll always be there.

You believed

Everyone else,

You trusted them

Instead of me

In the end

Who was there

Through it all

Not them

But me,

You see

I will always

Be your friend

Through 

Thick

And thin

We'll be 

Best friends

Until the end 

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Wow, this is really beautiful. I love it, since I can definitely relate to it. I have had those times when a friend wouldn't listen to me, when I was right. In the end, they stood her up and I was still there for her. You sound like a true friend to me.
Great job expressing your feelings on how you'll always be there no matter what. :)


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[nevermindfan1991]

Your poetry is amazing but I feel there is more to say. I would love hear more from this poem. I felt you left me hanging and wanting more unless that is your intention ;)

[Julio]

Definitely a succinct piece, although I'd suggest merging two verses into one. Right now it's basically "Oh yeah, this is good, but now I've got to move down... good, oh god, next verse again..." I get that you're trying to present each section of the idea of friendship independently and that you're trying to make each aspect of this certain friendship important, but when the message is really obvious, the structure and engagement with the reader is more important than trying to increase the impact of the message unnecessarily.

Overall, a good poem, and although it could do with a bit of work on the formatting, it's a charming piece of writing and it delivers effectiveness through simplicity. Well done!

[nigrum homonculus]

i love this, its so simple, so honest. whoever is your friend personally is lucky

[Virtuosa X]

You speak truth. People often tend to belittle or ignore the ones who care most about them.
Love it. Keep it up girl.

This is so sweet and wonderful

[Pax]

Friendship is one of the best thing that happened to an individual in life. You'll find one and lose one on the way but best friend stick like bubble gum.