Insane

Without you I am insane...

Its been a week

Without you,

It gets tougher everyday

There's not a minute 

That passes

With you not

On my mind

I miss you

So much

A part of me

Is missing

I know this is silly

But every second

I'm away from you

Makes me grow

More 

And more

Insane 

Author's Note

What do you think?

Reviews

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

Oh wow. This is quite wonderful. Many can relate to it, I know back in the past I would've been able to relate to it a lot too:) Very sweet and sometimes can be true. You poured your feelings out in a nice way.
Great job!

Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)

[emman]

This is nice..I can feel the emotion :)

[Kaylor Mason]

I think it's good! I really like the quickness of it--the way it kind of accelerates, like a human mind rolling down hill, snowballing into insanity; the speed of this piece is a nice touch.

i can relate to this piece, nicely done

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Well stated. Those deep connections are painful when there is no way to physically express yourself to your mate.
Nice write!

[Wondering Mind]

It does get crazy without a loved one.

[Destinyxi]

Nicely written. good job :)

Very easy to relate to. It is a nice read :) although over time you realize that you can move on from those feelings of insanity and grow from the experience.

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love this so much! It's quite simple but it explains the agony of missing someone...
Well done girl. =) I truely love this write.
Lovely!
It's hard to miss someone... especially if it drives you insane.. -sigh- i know the feeling well.

[light and ashes]

We need those we love to keep us grounded in order to keep us from being insane, nice write.