Just Die

Is this really about death?

Go ahead

Turn over

And die

Its not like

Anyone cares;

You're a loser,

A has been

You're now just

An annoying record

That plays the 

Same song

Over and over

And over again

Nothing's ever 

New with you

You talk about

The same old things

They're tired

Of listening,

Tired of reading,

Just go ahead

And die

You use to be 

Worth fighting for

Now you're just

Useless space...

Author's Note

What do you think I'm talking about? Enjoy! :)

Reviews

[icaros13]

What a direct admonishment. I particularly like your last stanza. I have felt this way before, and I'm sure others have felt this way about me. Clear and concise. The twisted side of me hopes the object of your muse has read this and felt its astringency...

[emman]

A puzzle poem?haha..I like this :)

[Oblivion]

I'm with Kes, it speaks to our own internal fears, maybe you wrote this to yourself, or me or all of us. To each of us that reads it, it screams ME, you wrote it to me.

[Ramya]

Somehow I like the simplicity of this piece, natural and outspoken!

[Coyote Poetry]

Direct and honest words. Some people can make us crazy and lead to negative thoughts and action. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Kes]

What do I think you're talking about?
Me. (said everyone). :)
Great piece of work.
K

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

This was a great write...I can think about a person as I'm reading this, but I also picture a jukebox playing the same songs over...repeating things that people hear every day. I enjoyed this write. Thanks for sharing.