Against The World

Against The World

A Poem by Tasha

An opinion
is what you think,
therefore I do not care
its us against the world
weeding out
unnecessary drama
with you by my side
I can stand up
to anything
me and you,
you and me,
its us against the world

© 2012 Tasha


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 Tasha
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Haha I love the attitude behind the poem. It's so strong and fierce and I love how it's not just one person against the rest of the world but a pair!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 Tasha

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
Great write, I really like the image you painted in this work. But I think that the term " us against the world " is a bit over used. Maybe try re-wording it to make it uniquely exclusive to your work. :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I guess this poem expresses That Tupac Shakur sort of defiance. F**** the world, it's us against the world.

good piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it!! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think it's well written a is written well. I think it is a deep and very strong poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and sweet nice write

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very good poem. Good to have two people against the world. Better chance of surviving and finding happiness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Succintly beautiful :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a song that has the last line of your poem in it. I have forgotten what the song is but my mom use to sing it to me when I was young and this poem reminded me of that tune. I like the thought and idea put into this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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