Against The World
A Poem by
Tasha
An opinion
is what you think,
therefore I do not care
its us against the world
weeding out
unnecessary drama
with you by my side
I can stand up
to anything
me and you,
you and me,
its us against the world
© 2012 Tasha
Author's Note
What do you think?
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Haha I love the attitude behind the poem. It's so strong and fierce and I love how it's not just one person against the rest of the world but a pair!
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
12 Years Ago
Thanks so much.
Great write, I really like the image you painted in this work. But I think that the term " us against the world " is a bit over used. Maybe try re-wording it to make it uniquely exclusive to your work. :-)
Posted 12 Years Ago
Great write, I really like the image you painted in this work. But I think that the term " us against the world " is a bit over used. Maybe try re-wording it to make it uniquely exclusive to your work. :-)
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I guess this poem expresses That Tupac Shakur sort of defiance. F**** the world, it's us against the world.
good piece.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I guess this poem expresses That Tupac Shakur sort of defiance. F**** the world, it's us against the world.
good piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I love it!! Thanks for sharing.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love it!! Thanks for sharing.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I think it's well written a is written well. I think it is a deep and very strong poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I think it's well written a is written well. I think it is a deep and very strong poem.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
short and sweet nice write
Posted 12 Years Ago
short and sweet nice write
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A very good poem. Good to have two people against the world. Better chance of surviving and finding happiness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
A very good poem. Good to have two people against the world. Better chance of surviving and finding happiness. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Succintly beautiful :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
Succintly beautiful :D
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
There is a song that has the last line of your poem in it. I have forgotten what the song is but my mom use to sing it to me when I was young and this poem reminded me of that tune. I like the thought and idea put into this piece.
Posted 12 Years Ago
There is a song that has the last line of your poem in it. I have forgotten what the song is but my mom use to sing it to me when I was young and this poem reminded me of that tune. I like the thought and idea put into this piece.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on April 28, 2012
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Tasha NC
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Hey, I'm 18 years old and I love writing.
"To know me is to love me"
"Every heart has a beat and mine just skips for you"
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