Scattered

Broken promises,

Crushed dreams,

Scattered across

The Floor

In a pile of

Uncertainty

Stepped on,

Scattered about,

Are the missing pieces

To my broken heart

Left by the one

I had loved, 

To you I'm just a glass

That was meant

To be shattered  

Reviews

[aaron]

beautifully dark and enchanting. simple and yet affective. keep up with the work its grate.

[amdc101]

"In a pile of
Uncertainty"

"To you I'm just a glass
That was meant
To be shattered"

Favorite lines :)

[Jeremy Baker]

Very dark and despondent, with stark images and melancholic style. Very well executed and structured!

[closed..acct]

I love this write, so amazing
wonderfulyly expressed as well.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Powerful words with so much pain! Great job with this one.
A broken heart can be tough to fix. Very true and straight-forward.

Love this poem!

[Aidz]

Mmm I dont have the glue to fix this heart :(

[Chris]

Tasha`,

This has a strong taste to it... hope tis but a story.

Take care,
Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

I missed your poetry. The poem is amazing. Your words are true. If we never have loved. We would never have known pain or pleasure. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[EmpressPoetess]

This really expresses the pain and emotional breakdown of being rejected. Great job!