Every Time

Having a crush but not being able to express your feelings to them.

I can't even tell you

What's going on inside my head

When I look at you my heart smiles

I can't get you out of my mind

When you talk to me

I get butterflies

And I try to find a way

To break them loose 

But its something I can't help,

And every time you talk to me

My heart skips a beat

Making me want you more and more

Every time you walk away...

I feel like yelling at you to stay

Because you're different,

Beautiful,

And wonderful,

I get this feeling inside

Which is the reason why

I can't stop thinking about you

Author's Note

What did you think?

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Oh the honesty and the truth, the feelings behind each word... not telling a crush though wanting too, it is something. I like this, it is rather difficult to tell someone what you think of them, like them, love them, a crush. You express that well in this write, nice one.

[Canicus]

I thought this was sweet. it's a great write, keep up the good work.

[closed..acct]

i really loved this, I know these feelings so well too.
This is wonderfully written.

[Wretched Knight]

Love from afar. Very nice!

[Matthew Ryan Hardy]

Personally I think it kinda jumps around, but that's me. Other then that you got a nice peace of writing here :)

Matthew Hardy

[Chris]

I think you really put this one together very well. Its clear and has heart...

[quinfinn]

been a while since i've seen your stuff...you are greatly improved in your writing skills and you have gone from very promising to strongly impressive in that short time. excellent !

[nevermindfan1991]

I thought it was wonderful. I know say this all time but you never cease to amaze me. You're an amazing poet!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Hmm nothing sweeter or more painful than a crush and nothing lingers longer than that memory which is perfectly intact and unencumbered by life. Loved it:)