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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
Our Story

Our Story

A Poem by Tasha
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What our story is...

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Our story's been read
And its an official best seller,
A vibe picked up from ever reader
A connection that can't be explained
Our story is something everyone can
Relate to..
We started out as classmates
Then friends
Then a counsellor   to each other's problems
But once middle school graduation hit
We went our separate ways
And I haven't talked to you since...
Finally juniors in high school,
Almost finished..
I come home to find a message
From you saying
"Hey best friend I miss you,
We need to talk real soon"
It made me smile and cry
Because I thought your hung our friendship
Out to dry
Our story's just like a fairytale,
Only with a much more happy ending...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
This is the second part to "There's more to it..."
Enjoy.

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I like this, I think a few typos possibly. I like the story within this. Graduation can feel like you have lost your best friend. I know that feeling all to well. Nice write and feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

isn't friendship grand...especially when you felt it was lost...nice work on this poem T'Shandra

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoyed this. So fresh as the relationship grows. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic beauty such as this is a lifetime worth of inspiration.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can't wait for the next installment...but please don't tell me how the story ends.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-63ugCnPQ-M (the song by that title)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it it's simple and wonderful

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the simple folw of this piece and how it leads the reader through your past. the effect that the message had on you was perfect as well. Its always wonderful when a lost friend returns. I enjoyed this piece and think its a wonderful sequil

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was really nice I am enjoying your growth...good morning

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 6, 2011
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 Tasha
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