I Toss And I Turn

Not being able to let go of someone.

Every night is hard to sleep,

So I toss and turn

Dreaming about you

Is the only thing

On my mind

No matter what I do

You will always be apart of me...

Attached to my heart,

Attached to my mind,

I toss and turn

Trying to clear my head

But it only leaves me

Restless and confused

Author's Note

Written 9/19/11.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

Gosh, how straight forward this poem is. I love it because I can relate to it. lol. It seems your poems, I can always relate to! =D But really, I've felt like this recently.. and I must say letting go of someone is really difficult especially when it's a loved one or someone you were crushing/loving. -sigh- Sometimes it's like the head doesn't just see that the heart isn't ready yet. To let someone go... takes time.. something has to free you.. Ahh, this is so emotional and very deep for me! Thank you for writing!! I love this poem!

[Daytonight]

Boy does this describe me to a t! I can so relate! Well done. Keep on penning.

[☯]

This described exactly what I do some nights. It's like there's a whole other world behind your lids, just questions flying everywhere. It describes completely and very nicely, what goes on. It's straightforward, short and sweet. The last line is my favorite part. Great job! :)

[unknown]

I can relate. Good poem!

[Lily Mae]

I hate it when that happens.. but it does because we love and ...we're good at it ;) xo so keep loving, keep dreaming and keep wanting sleep lol..xo

[LadyKarissa]

I don't do anything but toss and turn all night. Even though I take meds for it. Ever since I lost my beloved Frank nearly four years ago all I do is toss, turn, and cry.
Sometimes I wish my heart would stop and I would die. Lucie

[Kat Collins]

Simple, but sweet. Drives the point home. It has a wistful, airy sadness that I felt in my heart.

[((Teenage_Poet_Loser))]

i like one =D really cooool