Look Out For Me

Thanking all the people that look out for me.

The world is like a circus

With all its twists and turns

It's nice to have someone

Look out for me...

Someone I can lean on

When times get tough

Someone I can depend on,

I'm glad you look out for me

You give me the protection that 

I need,

Thank you for taking the time out

To look out for me,

I will forever do the same for you 

Author's Note

Written: 9/25/11.

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

I love it! It's very comforting. I can relate to this poem. It's really nice to have someone there for you, through the good and bad. That person is there to catch us when we fall. Thanks for writing! =D I missed reading your works.
You did a great job!

[Adelia Alighieri]

I find this utterly relatable, the words are so simple yet lyrical.

[Andrea Vargas]

I like it but i suggest you add a couple of words like to before the look out for me .... to make it flow better (:

[Daytonight]

So very sweet! Keep up the great work!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Hey, that's cool...I could use someone to cover my back! Around here you judge your friends by who stabs ya in the front...lol... the kisses of an enemy are deceitful but even the wounds of a friend are faithful...I like that proverb...it means a friend might hurt your feelings but they are just trying to help you out...and man, that never goes well does it? lol Anyway, I like this poem and the message behind it...great stuff, keep up the good work!

[Shreds Of Me]

i really enjoyed this piece, amazing read

[iand63]

gratitude from the heart really like well done

[roy mccarthy]

i like how its non rhymey,
but still poetic......
good piece :)

[light and ashes]

The people that look out for us do deserve our gratidue such as you have expressed in this poem, nice work.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Beautiful, heartfelt and nice wisdom too, great write :)

[LadyKarissa]

There is a Karen Carpenter Song call "I WON'T LAST A DAY WITHOUT YOU" it reminds me of this poem. I had someone to look after me but he died. Now I have no one I am alone and if I had my way I would not be here. Lucie