This Wall Shall Fall

Struggles crumbling down...

Every struggle,

Every test,

Is a piece that built this wall

But this wall shall fall

Because it's my turn

To feel accomplished,

My turn to feel superior

This wall shall crumble down

Along with all the heartache

And pain that put this wall together

All that I've had,

All that I've lost,

Is falling down like a glacier

Falling into a pile of misery

That I am no longer apart of

Because I

Tore

The 

Wall

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Author's Note

Thanks if you review.

Reviews

[Amila Jay]

A wall built of hopes.......great poem:)

[EMF]

Real good piece. A 'joy' to read and see your craftsmanship and theme development.

[Bridgette's Ink]

Wow, right when I got the read request I was reading it. It's really really good. It's like facing struggles (well in my eyes it is).

[LadyNaida]

By the way, I love the way you wrote it, it kind of looks like a face with a thin neck. :)

[LadyNaida]

I love this! Very heartfelt! Nothing better than to feel those kinds of walls tumbling down to see the bright future ahead.

[iand63]

good for your triumphal efforts

[MS. BABy]

wonderful the message the form awesome....

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OOO! I love this, So amazing!
Breaking down walls, something we all need to learn to do,
So well said and wonderful.

[Sleepless]

yeah 1 this really make me happy it inspired me to break down many walls in my life too love the poem !:)