Butterfly Fly Away

Butterfly Fly Away

A Poem by Tasha
"

Telling someone to get lost.

"
Butterfly fly away
Come again another day
Reappear when I'm okay
Cause right now I don't know
What to do

(Chorus)
Butterfly, Butterfly
Just fly away
You only just seem 
To get in the way
Can't take it
Any more
So butterfly 
Just fly away

You've got a way
Of showing up 
Unannounced 
It's so annoying
The things you do

You walk up to me and say hello
And you get ignored
Why do you come along
When no one likes you at all?
For the things you did

(Chorus)
Butterfly, butterfly
Just fly away
You only just seem
To get in the way
Can't take it
Any more
So butterfly 
Just fly away 

No one wants you around
So boy leave me alone,
It's over
We're through,
I'll un-friend  you

So boy make like a butterfly
And fly out my life.....

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
My third song.

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u know i love this but when it said about the butterfly going awy because of things it done i thought what could a butterfly do wrong and then it hit me .....eat the cabbages they blinkin eat the cabbages lol!! brill little song i found myself trying to put a tune to it and singing it (not that i sing very well lol!)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the flow and the desire of this poem. I like the strong ending. You are being polite in the poem for requesting someone to leave your life. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done T :) x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I do like how you used the old song as a basis, and I like the idea. It's a wonderful song. It could use some editing, but as it is it's wonderful. Keep writing :]

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

u know i love this but when it said about the butterfly going awy because of things it done i thought what could a butterfly do wrong and then it hit me .....eat the cabbages they blinkin eat the cabbages lol!! brill little song i found myself trying to put a tune to it and singing it (not that i sing very well lol!)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job!! Made me laugh a little!! I loved it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it :D lol
Great job seriously


Xoxoxo
~ abbie
100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful and lovely song :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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