Rain Down On Me

Raining everywhere.

All the pain,

All the losses in life

Fall into my lap

And I need an umbrella

To protect me from the rain,

It's a thunderstorm of darkness

A thunderstorm of hurt

And all I can do is watch

The rain fall down on me

I run and hide

So I won't get wet,

I try to hide from the truth

But it always ends up 

Finding me

So I sit in this spot

And hope the storm

Is over soon

As I watch it all

Rain down on me

Author's Note

I needed to write this.

Reviews

[Inyourshadow]

The truth is that you get wetter running in the rain instead of walking and here as a metaphor I feel running from the problem and the pain only makes it worse, better to walk away head held high and let it wash over you, for in the pausing can we claim something of ourselves back realising we are beaten but not broken, tomorrow is another day and without them we are still us. Keep em' coming

[Luciole]

Really great poem. I loved the emotion of it and the story is a good kind of upsetting. Well done :)

[DRD]

Amazing, it was well versed, though I think its missing a quality.

[Adelia Alighieri]

How beautiful! :O

[Chelsea]

I absolutely adore this! Everyone feels like this sometimes, but I doubt many could put it so eloquently! Great write.. keep it up(:

[Erinne S.]

I loved everything about this piece, every word, every line, every little detail.
Absolutely great job!

~Erinne

[little mermaid]

Sad but nicely written. I know the feeling. I hope the sun comes out for you soon.

[C.M. Waters]

Funny.... I just wrote a poem about rain and sunshine. :P

[Amila Jay]

So true, love this one, great write:)

[geetha]

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