Watching My Prey

Obsession and wanting revenge.

Getting ready

Looking my best

Tonight I will put you to the test

The test of self control,

You won't even know its me

You can sense that someone is watching you

But you don't know who,

That's what it should feel like when I'm 

Watching my prey

Waiting for you to mess up

Waiting for you to make a mistake

A mistake that could damage

Everything we had

And worked hard for

I walk up to you in my light blue mask

I tap your shoulder

And give you a long passionate kiss,

The party stops

Not a word is said

I turn around to runaway

But halfway out the door someone catches my hand 

I smile to myself,

I spun  around so fast

I couldn't even see who it was

Whoever it was returned the passionate kiss

Making my heart skip a few beats

I had to do what I had to do,

I pulled my dagger from around my ankle

And I stabbed him,

I watched as my prey fell helplessly to the ground

I kissed his cheek as I watched him fall

Into a deep never ending sleep

Author's Note

Since I've been away for a while I thought I'd come back with a bang. I hope you like it. Sorry I went crazy with the colors.

Reviews

[Kestrova]

The colors really make each statement stand out and add flavor to an already fantastic piece. This had a good rhythm, even if it took me a moment to catch on to it. However, the flow is disrupted in the fifth stanza with the word 'spinned' when 'spun' would be the appropriate term. Other than that, it's a great poem! :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice use of colors and nice write. I really enjoyed it. Well done.

[TheElfPrincess]

I love masquerades and this poem brought up that love well. The sentences are well flowing and I like the rhythm. Well done.

[Marie Harrison]

Well I'd say you did come back with a bang!

[Becky C Strukamp]

You definitely came back with a bang. Love the structure. You crafted this beautifully. An enjoyable read.

[Hello, Goodbye]

curiously creative write.. very interesting read.. enjoyed for sure..

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very clever to add the font color it makes the lines really stand out. Great write!

The colours are good indeed...
Awesome writing... loved it.
It is a bang. :)

[Sunflower 20]

woah, loved the dramatic ending. it reminded me a bit of cinderella, loved it! :)

[Lily Mae]

I enjoyed it..and welcome back.. :) xx