Don't Hold Your Breath

Don't Hold Your Breath

A Poem by Tasha
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I think you can figure it out.

"
Don't hold your breath for me,
Don't waste your time
It's over,
I'm done with you
Its too late to crawl back now,
It's too late to apologize
The damage has already been done
Don't hold your breath for me
Because your time was up 
When two became three,
If your going to do that
Then there's no point in me
Holding my breath for you
You lied,
You cheated,
You had your way
And now it's my turn to say...
"Don't hold your breath for me because I wouldn't want to see you pass-out"

© 2011 Tasha


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i really liked the power in this and i can feel how angry and betrayed you must have been. however, i need to mention that you need to be careful of cliche's as upon reading the line "it's too late to apologize" i started singing "it's too laaaaaate" ahah :')

Posted 12 Years Ago


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very nice. it has a great flow with a great message. well done :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It happens so much when love is abused by those who allow wanton emotions to rule :0)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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