Don't Hold Your Breath

I think you can figure it out.

Don't hold your breath for me,

Don't waste your time

It's over,

I'm done with you

Its too late to crawl back now,

It's too late to apologize

The damage has already been done

Don't hold your breath for me

Because your time was up 

When two became three,

If your going to do that

Then there's no point in me

Holding my breath for you

You lied,

You cheated,

You had your way

And now it's my turn to say...

"Don't hold your breath for me because I wouldn't want to see you pass-out"

Reviews

[freelancejouster]

i really liked the power in this and i can feel how angry and betrayed you must have been. however, i need to mention that you need to be careful of cliche's as upon reading the line "it's too late to apologize" i started singing "it's too laaaaaate" ahah :')

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this is an awesome poem! i really enjoyed it! i can relate.

[christeechung ♥]

Love it~

[FireWoman]

This reminds me of a quote from Maya Angelou. “The first time someone shows you who they are, believe them.”

Nicely written.

[Stef Outsiders]

You go girl!! Brilliant!..

[JeSSe]

lovin it =]

[Groovy]

Great piece of writing

[Gilbert Saint]

Very strong.

[light and ashes]

Nicely put, well done :D

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I like the last statement. Very bold.