A Writer In Flames

A Writer In Flames

A Poem by Tasha
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For the creative poetry group. words: flame, imprint, quiver, arrow, pursue, contrive, subjugate, ambrosial, and indulgent.

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Trying to pursue a career in writing is tough,
There is always someone trying to take your spot,
To steal your thunder,
To put out your flame,
And the thought of losing the spotlight
Makes me quiver,
Quiver at the thought of another writer 
Being better than me,
An arrow used to pin point the type of writing 
I'm good at, or use to be good at,
To contrive my old writes into one
To come up with one final piece to be shipped off
I sign my name leaving one final imprint,
The theme.. indulgent parents
Something I truly know nothing about
But I force my pen to become subjugate,
I am the writer,
I control it all!
A few weeks later, a letter comes in the mail
It says.... 
"Congratulation your piece has been chosen for a mural."
Finally ambrosial,
My work's finally out there
For other people to see for years to come,
I guess I won't be a writer that crashes and burns

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
This was a harder challenge than I thought. It took me two days to come up with this.

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i feel like you came up with an idea and stuck with it. which, is an admirable thing to do, but feels like you were also stuck in it, as if it weren't working and you tried to force it to. there's a stiffness. do you know what i mean?

regardless of this, i found it an excellent piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Wow! I really enjoyed this! Good things come to people that wait!:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Excellent work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congrats on great job--I still haven't tried one of those challenges---

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Those word challenges are crazy fun you never know what world the writer will create and no two see the words in the same light, loved the poem you burnt up the page with this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

If you keep writing like this, you definitely won't crash and burn.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is well thought about
though i miss a little emotion,
further it is beautifull,!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting way to describe writing. It seems like you could easily rework this to fit sports--"there is always someone trying to take your spot, to steal your thunder, to put out your flame."

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh, Dear Ta'Shandra...you won't soon crash and burn. Wonderful writing. I loved every word.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've come through the challenge with flying colours I must say, love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Congratulations Ta'shandra, you deserve it )) Very nicely celebrated too, up here in this lovely write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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