It's You

My first attempt at a song.

You hold me tight 

And say everything will be alright

You give me hope

To help me cope

You are so special

To me

And it's you I adore

(Chorus)

You're so sweet

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you I agree

You fill me up with glee

You make me proud

To have you around

(Chorus)

You're so sweet

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you,

It's you,

And all the things you do

To bring me closer to you

(Chorus)

You're so sweet 

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you I agree

You feel me up with glee

I can't deny

You're such a nice guy

Author's Note

This was my first song ever, I hope you like it!

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

[Sweets]

This is amazing!
I loved how you used the rhymes in here!
Wonderful work! :)

[Marie Harrison]

Now lets hear you sing it!
I could see this as a song that I hear on the radio.
Great first song.

[rose with love]

I agree with "Thrinna Mae", it would be really nice if someone would sing this. honestly, I would like to hear this as a soul, jazz, blues type of song =) like Aretha Franklin.
i really like it.

[chaireinferrascalayca]

so now you're singing? kidding. good piece...

[KAREN]

Great job, I think you nailed it! Now get some music to it and you'll have a hit song!!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice. Find a guitar and chord it out.

[stars are far]

this is so nice the rhyme is great :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Would make a nice song I think, very nice number:)

[Thea]

Can I be the singer? Haha! Just kidding...I wanna hear someone sing this...This is such a sweet song...Love it, ~ Ta'Shandra ~... :)))