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It's You

It's You

A Poem by Tasha
"

My first attempt at a song.

"
You hold me tight 
And say everything will be alright
You give me hope
To help me cope
You are so special
To me
And it's you I adore

(Chorus)

You're so sweet
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you I agree
You fill me up with glee
You make me proud
To have you around

(Chorus)

You're so sweet
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you,
It's you,
And all the things you do
To bring me closer to you

(Chorus)

You're so sweet 
You're so neat
It's everything about you
The way,
The way,
The way
You make me feel

It's you I agree
You feel me up with glee
I can't deny
You're such a nice guy

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
This was my first song ever, I hope you like it!

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Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Very sweet!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I must admit, it's cheesy, but it's cute.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice. Now you need the music. Very nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Its a very "awwwwww" inducing song. Sounds like something Mylie Cyrus or Hilary Duff would have sung. Fantastic work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I did like it, would love to hear you sing it. :0)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool song.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Really a good song

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Catchy!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Woowwww....!!!!..beautifull song the lyrics are well written it has got soul and really attractive

Regards
PRODICAL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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