It's You

My first attempt at a song.

You hold me tight 

And say everything will be alright

You give me hope

To help me cope

You are so special

To me

And it's you I adore

(Chorus)

You're so sweet

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you I agree

You fill me up with glee

You make me proud

To have you around

(Chorus)

You're so sweet

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you,

It's you,

And all the things you do

To bring me closer to you

(Chorus)

You're so sweet 

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you I agree

You feel me up with glee

I can't deny

You're such a nice guy

Author's Note

This was my first song ever, I hope you like it!

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

[Andrea Vargas]

i love it but i feel it needs more passion. But great job for your first song!

[Christina May Shanaberg]

What, no player added at the end with you singing it?! Just kidding, nice flow. Great first attempt!

[Siddharth T]

Amazing...

u sure youre not a song writer? :-)

Nice work!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Nice flow, you did a great job

[Midori]

T was easy to read. It also flowed nicely. I like it.

[Valette]

This looks like something you'd sing under your breath while you're working. Easy to remember, with a nice, steady tempo. Nice song.
Though I was wondering- how does one "feel me up with glee"? It sounds very- IDK, humorous?

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A flowed and strict piece, I find it soothing for my mind, a truly great read.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Your first attempt was very good!
Now I wanna hear it set to music...

[Brad Nugent]

Nice. I must admit I have no sense of what works with music or not. I would have to hear it performed. But I liked the words!

[EMF]

Very sweet and good attempt. Interesting to see how others develop.