It's You

My first attempt at a song.

You hold me tight 

And say everything will be alright

You give me hope

To help me cope

You are so special

To me

And it's you I adore

(Chorus)

You're so sweet

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you I agree

You fill me up with glee

You make me proud

To have you around

(Chorus)

You're so sweet

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you,

It's you,

And all the things you do

To bring me closer to you

(Chorus)

You're so sweet 

You're so neat

It's everything about you

The way,

The way,

The way

You make me feel

It's you I agree

You feel me up with glee

I can't deny

You're such a nice guy

Author's Note

This was my first song ever, I hope you like it!

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Good work on this. You have a good idea and feelings like these can always conjure up a song...and quick. Haha. But yeah, we all have that one person that makes us feel special and different, seen and not as invisible. They make us feel like on top of the world. I remember having these feelings...with a certain someone.

[Loner]

I really did like it ...... nice lyrics....

[William Maisonave]

I like it

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the song. Good movement and positive words. Thank you for the outstanding poem/song.
Coyote

[Daytonight]

Good work on your first song. Each one will get better and easier. Keep up the good work.

[J.]

I noticed that you write a lot of things dealing with love.... Its emotional, but it feels forced or fake. It doesn't seem real. I'd like to see a composition of music and hear someone sing it.

[Fontane Wong]

The emotion is full and strong, and the rhymes makes the whole song more musical. You're a reallly talented song writer. If there's more passion in the whole song, it'll be perfect!

[Joseph D. Smith]

Your song is structured so well! I like the flow of it, and the pure emotions that flow with it! You can be a lyricist with no problem! Kudos to you! You capture the feelings in this song quite well.

I give this piece a 100!

[Aidz]

We all gotta start somewhere... :)

[Yina]

Aw:) I think that was really good:) I'm terrible at even attempting to write a song so I can't really judge this at all:) I wish I could hear the song:)