I Think You're The One

A good note turned sour.

I think you're the one for me

Because you're unlike all the others,

You treat me like a star

I'm getting the royal treatment,

I think you're the one for me 

Because you make me feel special,

You make me feel beautiful

And worth something

You are the one for me

Because of your boyish charm

And adorable smile,

You had me wrapped around your finger!

I thought you were the one for me

But you led a double life,

You made me believe that who you said you were

As the real you.. But it wasn't,

You're just a crook in disguise

Trying to steal someone else's joy

I thought you were the one for me

But you turned out to be

Just like all the others 

Reviews

[Brad Nugent]

Unfortunately it does take time until we find the right relationship - that perfect fit. Some start well in our own minds, but end badly as you describe. Some never get off the ground because they are clearly not right! I hate admitting that I am a romantic optimist at heart - but I do believe that happiness and love are out there - sometimes in the least expected places. A nice write about love and the betrayal of love that hurts so much when it hits us. Well done.

[Seashell]

There are a lot of them about I'm afraid... Don't let them win tho...
Good subject..
Keep writing
Thanks for share
Babs x

[RedInk524]

Interesting, but i think its a little too direct..

[misha]

This is a powerful poem, great job!

[d]

you are making me think that sometimes everyone is just like all the others, if that makes any sense. i don't know if that is what you intended but it is how i often feel and this poem is bringing that out. i like the way it starts leading in one direction and then (sadly) turns to the other side. i wish it had a happier outcome, but then things don't always work out that way. i like this poem.

[The fallen of innocence]

don't u hate it when it seems like that u found the most perfect man but in the end, it just doesn't work

[nevermindfan1991]

Yes, sometimes people can truly be wolf in sheep's clothing. This poem was able to describe the problems that arise from deceit and trickery. I thought it was too abrupt though. I wish you had written more about the good times you had and also more on how deception made you feel. But nonetheless it was a great job!

[Lily Mae]

Oh no I was so exited but then boom..reality happens... This is a powerful write..and you penned the emotions very well..xx

[....]

Such a sad write here. I can understand this write. I have been there once though. Sorry about this....xo

[.n.]

Sweet beginning with quite a rapid switch in the middle...but isn't that the way of life. Nicely done.

[Tina Kline]

This heartbreaking situation seems to happen just a little too often. Your poem tells it like it is...the pain of discovering the person you loved just wasn't the real person at all. I think you did a really wonderful job on this write.