When Life Gives You Lemons

When Life Gives You Lemons

A Poem by Tasha
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ummm lemonade. lol

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When life gives you lemons
You make lemonade,
But what do you do when there is no lemons?
You make do with what you have,
You take every chance
Every opportunity,
To make your life better
Every lemon is a missing piece to the puzzle,
A key ingredient in what you thirst for
When life gives you lemons
You make lemonade
Even if you don't have lemons
You use the ingredients to make something better
As you sit on your porch and think about memories
While sipping lemonade

© 2011 Tasha


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Love this old saying though I prefere to add mine to my diet coke or squeeze them over fish lol, I often feel we should all learn to enjoy lemons and smile instead of grimace as the sourness of flavour imitates our lives at times and these are the times we more than ever need to smile. Keep em' coming

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I like it, you have something here....but to be honest 'life gives you lemons' is such an overused comparison that it's lost it's strength. I think this poem would be stronger if you created your own metaphor.
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Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's an old saying, but you make it sound so cool and new.
your optimism clearly shows in the poem. Life has many flavours

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love that saying and the poem is very good, always make the best of it. Great message, well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am returning your love.II like your optimism
yoursJVL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I believe that if life gives you lemons, you should make lemonade. And try to find somebody whose life has given them vodka, and have a party.
--Ron White

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really liked this.
It was short, but it got the point across.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really great work! a strong message with simple words

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

when life hands me lemons I ask for tequila and salt. No really this is good!...xo

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To be simple........ This makes life richer. If we could only stop wanting so much.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful piece of writing and so deep!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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