Room 8611

my thoughts on my aunt having her first child.

Room 8611,

The room where a new life began

The room where old grudges subsided

Where old things said are left in the past,

A place where everyone should come together

But you push us away,

You say that we don't know what we're talking about

You say you know what your doing,

But taking care of a baby is hard work

And listening to your friends is not helping

Room 8611,

The room where a new life begins

The room where new grudges grow

Room 8611,

Its not you its the people in the room...

Reviews

[blakjassy]

This is a very interesting insight into the coming together of a family... or at least that is what I get from it... So often happy family occasions such as Weddings, births, birthday gatherings... bring out the worst when in fact it should do the opposite!

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Nice...

Great write...

[EMF]

Complex, facinating poem, so many themes and so well written. Real nice work

[Marie Harrison]

Height of emotions in this room of yours.
Lots of synergy.
Babies always bring happiness to me.
The promise of a bright futures and
happy smiles.

[biggerthenu]

I LOVE THE IDEA IN THIS THE DAY OF BIRTH AND NEW BEGINNINGS NICE PIECE

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true at the beginning. A new life should bring hope and the family together. It is sad when a baby's day of birth is not positive for all people involved. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote