I Love You Like A Love Song

I Love You Like A Love Song

A Poem by Tasha
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Inspired by the Love You Like A Love Song by Selena Gomez.

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I love you like love song baby
I love you like a song on replay,
Our love is only temporary
Because you ended the song,
I remember when we use to walk hand in hand
When you use to hold me tight
And told me everything would be alright,
I remember when you made me feel special
Like the luckiest girl on earth
I love you like a love song baby
I love you like a song stuck on replay,
The lyrics to our song I'll never forget
I'm sure one day you will  regret
Ever ending our  love song
But until you realize it
You'll forever be my favorite love song...

© 2011 Tasha


Author's Note

 Tasha
I was listening to Selena Gomez while I was writing this. I hope you like it.

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The last two lines don't really make sense. You say that until said person realizes they were wrong, they'll be your favorite love song. Shouldn't it only increase your love for them if they come back? This poem doesn't pop to me--it's very... bland. I feel this has been written over and over again from the same angle and a topic like that needs some defining element or fresh outlook, if you're going to write the classic "we once were, but now we're not". Does that make sense? I'm really not trying to be harsh, only honest, and those people below you who talk nothing of the poem and only of the subject aren't helping. Hope this does!

Posted 13 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Yes, I do like it. A good easy flow, warm, romantic and a bit sad. Yet, I think the awareness keeps it real. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the song, and while the song is a love song, you have transformed it into a rather sad poem, which contradicts the song.
Wise, and nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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great write! a nice rhyme too - haven't heard the song ha - but I don't doubt you've done it justice! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought so, as soon as I saw the title... I remebered that Selena Gomez song... even though im not much of a fan but ya know..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem. It was sad but i loved it. =D Great write!! ^^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I thought the poem was very beautiful. I hope to read more.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a lovely poem. The rythme was amazing and I love the last line, It seems to bring the poem in a whole together. It was a lovely write. Keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Epic, even though I dislike Selena.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this! As soon as I saw the name I thought about Selena Gomez's song! Amazing write :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful! i loved it! sounds like a sad love song, great job :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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